Wednesday, December 28, 2011
jediSwift - chaos and agony - Passionate
[writer : jediSwift]
[anthology : chaos and agony]
[Style / Year : Hip Hop 2012]
[title : Passionate]
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united we stand divided we fall
tonight we dance, tomorrow we brawl
the fight must end, the dead must talk
we fight till death, or end it all
i might just rest, in central hall
the strife at best, is in our hearts
stylize the vest, with bullet marks
survive the test, for a better tomorrow
untie their heads, as they fall off
denie their quest, to enslave our thoughts
rewrite their mess, until their gone
revive the cross, like an army of god
if i find life hard, i carry on
the struggle is ours, not any longer
the bubble is burt, our army is stronger
under the rubble, we have holy armour
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the truth
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