Wednesday, December 28, 2011

jediSwift - chaos and agony - Passionate


[writer : jediSwift]
[anthology : chaos and agony]
[Style / Year : Hip Hop 2012]
[title : Passionate]
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united we stand divided we fall
tonight we dance, tomorrow we brawl
the fight must end, the dead must talk
we fight till death, or end it all

i might just rest, in central hall
the strife at best, is in our hearts
stylize the vest, with bullet marks
survive the test, for a better tomorrow

untie their heads, as they fall off
denie their quest, to enslave our thoughts
rewrite their mess, until their gone
revive the cross, like an army of god

if i find life hard, i carry on
the struggle is ours, not any longer
the bubble is burt, our army is stronger
under the rubble, we have holy armour
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the truth

21 comments:

  1. Wow - so surprising
    http://jobryantnz.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/x-is-for-xanthippe/

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  2. Passionate with strength of steel beneath. Reminds me of the expression - when the going gets tough, the tough gets going. Well-done!

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  3. first stanza rocks, the best here for me :)
    happy rally!!!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/souls-paradise/

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  4. great! I really really really enjoyed this and it was full of talent!

    ~L
    http://untitledmoments.com/2011/12/23/i-am-many-free-write-friday/

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  5. Awesome poem/song. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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  6. nice work..i got a whole new meaning to passion.

    Alcina-Breathless

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  7. good one..but I do wish you hadn't concentrated too much on the rhyme

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  8. I love how you were able to weave into your words such raw emotion.

    JP

    http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/12/30/my-heart-sings/

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  9. I like it very much, great work here.

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  10. i love this. rhyming and rocking! :D

    . . .persis ♥

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